Pastel Goth

(Probably spoilers. Writing as i go on!) The start is promising. A little unrealistic, assuming its set before 1999. No one in the year 2065(assuming the year.) would listen to fly me to the moon, let alone on a record player. So far they dont really seem to be in the ‘old’ athstetic. The storyline is confusing, theres already a massive plothole! IT WAS A FLASHBACK?or mabye a Nightmare? Scifi acts like ai can be smarter than humans. If ai can act real, but not like someone specific, it’ll need thousands of years before it can NUKE anything, not 40-100 years. Another massive plothole. Im not even going to bother to continue writing. Im giving it the benifit of the doubt and giving it 2/5 stars.