A good try yet a very slow paced conventional one
Protagonist seems to be a lost one
Lost in his own world, actions didn't match the scenario & the whole concept seems to be a loss
Characters meeting after such long with rage, hatred & few bits of love filled to its core couldn't express the underlying emotions well. This ain't a love completely.
Needs a lot improvement.
Anyways a good try, hope to see some good stuffs coming