You know the idea of the story is superb but the ending is the worse which I have ever read. Highly disappointed, he has shown triumph of evil over love. His mind may be creative but it is not less pathetic. May be you should have symbolised over love overcoming every single problem in this world which is an actual truth. Believe me your story at last you was horrible . I hope that you regret your decision forever. Overall , didn't like it much. But I would say , that making the storyline was a superb idea, it obviously is a wonderful read for any one who likes to