Edward Althouse

If this is the soap opera Marlene and Rebecca I would make some changes. The first change I would make is to replace the actor who played tristan with an actor who was more manly! Instead of the two room set up that Marlene and tristan had I would have at least a 4 room apartment and I would not show so much of them being in bed together. There was too much intimate scenes between the two. Next I would change the scene where Marlene and Rebecca were in the pool together. Marlene is about to give Rebecca a kiss when, here comes tristan. I would have tristan in later in the scene and allowed Marlene to kiss Rebecca. I would do away with the sex scene between Rebecca and Yuk thore. I would have had Rebecca refuse his advances. She would report him and he would be punished for his actions! As a result of this change I would not have had Marlene going to L.A. Instead I would have had Rebecca and Marlene getting Married. This would bring a happy ending to the soap opera. I also would like to have worked Carla into the soap opera. The lady who played Rebecca in Rebecca and Meriam could be Carla's girlfriend. OK! Cheers!