Cinematography is gorgeous of movie.
The biggest lack is rhythm. It's boring rhythm.
Imagine smooth the story
Till interval show entire story of salary which has been showed in second half then end the interval then show entire second half which was first it will make sense.
U did not had to copy ugramm as it is this is wrong the movie is so good we need rhythm for sense.
Just change first half to second and second half to first it will make more sense and plot twist.