Lydia Efobi

Jedil Perry’s world-building is superb, transporting the reader to an enchanting domain. Her prose is effortless and flows like a river, carrying us along on a journey of the imagination. The creatures she describes leap off the page, bringing the story to life in our minds. The author's ability to create such clear and concise images is impressive, and it adds a great deal to the reading experience. The characters are richly developed, with complex personalities and motivations. The author's talent is undeniable, making this fantasy tale a delight to read. Likewise, the author's straightforward language allows the reader to immerse themselves in the story without getting bogged down by complicated prose. Through her skilled storytelling, the delivery of the bully scene between the twins and Harold and Tom was shocking and satisfying. The contrast between the quiet and reserved yet mischievous Jessie and his sudden outburst of foul language and rage made a powerful and memorable moment. Jedil’s ability to create such a gripping scene is a testament to her talent, and it's clear that she knows how to keep her readers on the edge of their seats. The delivery of that scene was indeed masterful. The dark fantasy, the thrill, the suspense, and the author's ability to inject humor, especially into the conversation between the twins, were a true delight. This blend created a wholesome read. With the twins, the dialogue felt natural and authentic, with just the right balance of humor and sincerity. It was easy to imagine two siblings talking like this, and the author captured the playful and sometimes teasing dynamic between them. The humor felt effortless, adding a welcome touch of lightness to the story. This book effortlessly has a firm grip on its reader. Fantasy and sci-fi readers will relish this title. I did not spot any grammatical errors that hindered my reading experience. Hence, the book deserves a 5-star rating. Great job, Jedil!