Bazila John

I've read better stories on Wattpad written by teenagers. And especially with all the hype it had. I mean she kept saying it's sort of like Hunger Games. Where is that part? I couldn't find any of that in the book. And it doesn't make sense most of the time. The characters are so flat. The storyline is confusing and please come up with better names for people and their realms. I wouldn't mind it being this bad if the hype hadn't been so outrageous. And the writing is so bad. It's so cringe at places. I mean I get that she has a story but it's a really bad piece of writing. Honestly.