5 chapters down and I am waiting for the book to actually sound like a book. The sentence formations and repetition of words has literally got me to shut the book.
'Hey this is a apple', said Sujata.
'Hahahahaha, I didn't know', I laughed.
'Now you know', responded Sujata.
'Hahahahaha', we both bursted.
That's how a book is written?