Arthur Leonard

It was fairly well formed. But very slow. The dialogue wasn’t realistic at all. The characters were boring. The ending was predictable. A nice easy read thought, not much thought required. I respect the author a lot for managing to publish a book, however it could definitely be improved and I think with some work on characterisation, dialogue and the ending it could be a really good story. I did rather like the ending though really. It wasn’t a bad book but needs work.