Jason Paulse

First and foremost beautiful story. Episode 13 was really not needed. Emma died too soon and her accident didn't really satisfy me for someone who could die there althou her face described it but the people by the accident didn't make much movement to assist her like there was no hurry to engage in helping the women who you literally bumped and there was no real in that either. The writer made a excellent script where Em says she is going to sleep by the French guy and she will be back in the morning absolutely made a tear or two fall but soon after Em was back and said she had told the guy she had tonsillitis but Dex never said he had as I recall he said his neck is a little swollen from the trip and this made the scrip felt a little off balance. Their happiness came unfortunately too soon and the writer should have left that for the last episode where they end up together and actually have a baby and buy a house. It end with grieve and sadness and I know the writer wants us to pity with Dex and form this reality that people have lived in for centuries but make the story a little more interesting. Dex wife cheated on him with cullum. The writer made a huge mistake there aswell. At the wedding Cullum already offered a job to Dex and all that and I know that the wife comes from a privileged family and all but why cheat on Dex with Cullum. The writer could have maybe made the character Cullum more handsome and more muscular for us to believe that it was actually a thing but none of it and it was disappointing. I saw someone in the reviews asked why would Dex on the first night at Edinburgh go for someone like Emma as Dex was a cool guy and everyone knew him and all and Em not so popular at all. But I understand the writer for not making Em more attractive as it would not give us much hope of believing that it might end as it did. The story goes way too fast in the middle of the story as Dex ended up separating from his the writer does not allow the reader the opportunity to know how Dex found out or why their separated which is very disappointing. Overall good series. Could have written it better and excellent use of language and facial expressions. 6.5/10😊