zahra nazemnia

I’ve read about 120 pages of the book and really didn’t enjoy it. I’m not a moral person child trafficking and murder don’t bother me in a book that’s why I got it and thought it would be fun seeing everyone exited about the dark romance and all and I’m aware it’s too soon to be able to judge the book fully but Most importantly The author maybe tried but didn’t achieve really getting into the characters written. leaving the perspective you were in and entering the new one while they might have things in common. You can’t just have two characters saying many Curse words and having violent thoughts and think you’ve created different persons who are a good match you need to let go of your own personality wholly for your characters to be unique on their own and not a desperate struggle to sound convincing . Also Shoving obsession and love together needs valid reason not just instinct to reproduce or liking a beautiful face and body with curve and even if you come at me saying being a lunatic stalker isn’t logical itself there must be a depth to the character you can’t just write a murderous personality with good features give him a good cause and make lame excuses for his wrongdoings in name of possessive love and expect it to be attractive!! All and all some might disagree for some plot twists that I suspect would come in future chapters but evaluating the literature used the plot and characters I’ll say I’ve read books with less rating which are written stronger.