We suffered through about half of this slow, ambiguous production before giving up. Suspension of disbelief is always an issue for me, and this was immediately a challenge due to the very obvious African facial features of the lead actresses. Clare's dyed hair wasn't a 'thing' in the 1920's. White women considered dyed hair for strumpets, and you'd be hard pressed to find a photo of a black woman of that period with bleached hair. From Josephine Baker to Ethel Waters to Dorothy Dandridge to Hazel Scott, the elite black women of the day weren't going blond! It would seem, then, that passing for an elite white woman would not include hair bleaching. Some of the sets were so bare and devoid of interest that one had to wonder if the film had a budget at all. Long navel-gazing moments between characters we didn't even know yet were unnecessary and taxing to the audience's interest. (Thinking of Clare and Irene's second meeting with its bare backgrounds and looooong silences that conveyed nothing.)
Kids acting up wouldn't be tolerated in that day, especially in a black household. "Children should be seen and not heard" was an oft heard admonition.
The lack of AUTHENTIC music in the club scene was unfortunate. What we hear has nothing to do with what was going on at the time. Ellington was active at this time in the uptown Cotton Club, and this should have been the go-to source for the sound-track. RESEARCH, people! Do it right!
The "black and white" cinematography of today's Netflix productions (Mank, e.g.) is always a huge disappointment. Are you using an iphone app to change color to B&W? Because there is none of the contrast, sharpness of line and definition or accuity of shading found in real B&W films. I'm not even talking about noirs, just any run of the mill 50's flick like Ed Wood's Plan Nine or the 1968 "Night of the Living Dead".
Poor character development, very slow moving and opportunities missed. I'm eager to read the book soon.