Linda Cooper

Loved the story . Had me hooked . Loved each individual , their characters coming strongly through . A roller coaster of a story . Couple of errors . They seem to drive through Derby (red brick factories ? ) there are none now in existence . The journey took them to Derby before reaching Ashby de la Zouch and Kegworth on their journey South to North . Derby is good 20miles or so after Ashby and Kegworth therefore the geography a little out . Also when Jesse comes down after a shower , it is stated her face , bare of makeup is beautiful .A short while later it is mentioned her mascara is smudged . Would have thought proof reading would have picked such errors up . However brilliant story .Well worth reading .