Jennifer Lin

It is a very weak and overly padded incoherent mess, despite being very extensively researched. One of the primary aims for an author writing a book is to allow the readers to fully engage with their protagonist, unfortunately here it feels as if the author himself if trying to make us repulse from the protagonist all along the way. The jumbled up paddings doesn't help and the lost of focus has resulted in all the facts thrown out there but making the readers fail to actually feel the sense of words as if they're brought to life. Perhaps condensing the research and focusing solely on the perspective of the protagonist may help declutter the flow of the book.