Amity Spoon

Oh Kevin.. so brilliant and so stubborn. This is a mess!! It’s so visually interesting and so historically accurate. Yet, as usual, your story line flow is a HOT MESS. Can’t you ever listen to actual writers and editors that tell you to connect your story lines in a non chaotic way. You fail to even develope the characters. This is a [bleeping] mess, yet I’m still watching Chaper 1 and it’s kind of captivating because of the historical accuracy. Just learn to connect the individual stories and the motif that you are going for. Your communication style is, just horrid. Bit narcissistic if you ask me. He sees the story and doesn’t give a shit if anyone else can follow it. Fair enough, your creation . But, if you want others to listen, enjoy, follow; take notes from Taylor. 💥