Need to work on the story script, if it's a movie related with custom service, then should have mentioned the custom guidelines,rather than that need to add some thrilling action & should have continued with 2 or 3 parts.then I hope that movie become successful in world wide.
I think,to enhance the movie script related to viewers interest and infuse it with thrilling action, consider the following steps:
Script Development
Outline the Premise: Start with a clear premise that intertwines custom department with action. For example, a protagonist in a high-stakes custom service job uncovers a conspiracy involving counterfeit goods.
Integrate Guidelines: Include scenes that illustrate customer service guidelines. This can be done through training montages, interactions with difficult customers, or crises that test the protagonist's skills.
Action Sequences: Introduce thrilling action elements—chases, confrontations with antagonists, or a heist to save the country from fraud. Ensure these moments heighten tension and keep audiences engaged.
Character Development: Develop strong characters, including a relatable protagonist, a cunning antagonist, and memorable supporting characters. Show their growth throughout the series.
Cliffhangers and Sequels: End each part with a cliffhanger that sets up the next installment. For example, a revelation about a larger criminal network or a personal betrayal that leads to further action.
Perfecting Movie Reviews
Structure: Director should have organize all the segments with a clear structure—introduction, plot summary, analysis, and conclusion. This helps viewers follow your thoughts easily.
Highlight Strengths and Weaknesses: Discuss acting, direction, cinematography, and screenplay. Be specific about what worked and what didn’t.
Personal Connection: before release should have watched the movie & rectify the doors,I l hope this will help the audience reactions to the film. What moved them? What left they disappointed? This adds authenticity.
Contextual Comparison: Compare the film to similar genres or previous works by the director. This can help viewers gauge its uniqueness.
Engaging Conclusion: End with a strong conclusion, recommending whether to watch the film and for what audience it’s best suited.
Anyway I just share my thoughts, I hope this will help the director to direct max. Movies in the future.Thank you.