Lauren Hunter-Law

Should’ve just left it with it ends with us. The storyline is slow, And the jumping between atlas and lily is what makes it so. Nothing happens it’s just an inner monologue of rambling thoughts and the description of things left me irritated as it’s obvious it’s just filler to make the book more substantial. Should’ve been left more open to the readers imagination at the end and not just oh they’re married the end. For the last quarter of the book it feels super rushed as we all of a sudden zip through time, all of the characters are flat and you can tell where the situation is heading straight away. Won’t be recommending this one, but the first one is so much better.