(TW rape and violence)
(Minor spoilers)
-Multiple grammatical errors and mistakes (“bear” is used in a sentence, when “bare” is what should’ve been used)
-A main character that’s only slightly more likeable than Joffrey Baratheon from Game Of Thrones (and even saying that is a bit of a stretch)
-Ridiculous scenarios that are straight from the mind of a pretentious 16 year old, and would not conclude in the novel the way that they would conclude in real life (An Air Force cadet needlessly and purposely injures a fellow airman, and doesn’t get dishonourably discharged from the Air Force for doing that)
-The worst handling and use of an attempted rape scene that I’ve read in my life so far (the scene was used almost entirely to give one character something “violent, heroic, and badass” to do, and barely, if at all, focuses on the victims’ response to the trauma and their respective healing processes)