Zakariya

Its alright. i do not like it because it is too long for the information being given. they could of packaged the story smaller while retaining all the meaning. I think this story was basing off ideology of superior knowledge. What failed is that the superior knowledge only gave objective information. When objective information is presented the actions against if become subjective (thus ruining the information). I do not know if that was the main intention of the story but if it was not that would be poor execution. The final reason i rated it a 1 star is because it is to bland. The story does not offer much resettling ideas only bounces off on topic making hard to focus on. Reading this makes me feel like i am eating a banana but each bite causes me to have a brain freeze.