Sarah Kohler

Story jumps around from point A to point C to point B and it almost diminishes the emotional payoff of the film. It would have been more powerful if it had been told in chronological order. Some of the imagery used to describe grief and loss is a little unclear at points. The girl's "ghost" (I don't even know what it supposed to be) brings her parents' "ghosts" together and then turns into the moon and smiles at them, but what is that even supposed to mean with regards to losing a child and dealing with grief and the child's desperation for her parents to stay together? Pretty decent film, but execution and clarity is a bit lost at points, which is unfortunate because it's only 12 minutes, so every minute and every scene needs to be as clear and purposeful and possible.