This was published fanfiction. Sally was an anxiety ridden crybaby, Jack's constant "My wife" was obnoxious, and the sheer amount of run on sentences was annoying. Sally is down to earth, cautious, and brave, not whimpering and picking out her stitches as she cries in a closet and begs for Jack to tell all the meany townfolk to leave her alonnnnnnnne. She tried to trick Oogie Boogie so she could free Santa Claus alone, for goodness sake. The final confrontation was closer to being in character for how Sally may've solved beating the bad guy, but the finale was super weak. Do not recommend.