Minor Spoilers
A lot better than the first one. Gives very clear goals and motivations for the Seers (people who want everyone else to see the monster) and lets you see it through their point of view. Lets you see that they are also victims to the monster and makes you feel bad for them.
The plot is very clear and easy to follow. It goes back in time a little bit to explain the motives of the main character but its very obvious when this is happening and very clear how it connects to the main story. I don't want to be mean but maybe thinking might not be for you folk.
A bit more Spoiling
Other than that its just people who are salty that the creature wasn't clearly defined even though the whole point was that it was different for everybody