Manisha and Javed were so amazing! BUT yeh storyline was flawed. How can the guy be such a bad actor and then invest everything into his film?
Usually passionate people who are amazing at what they do take such big risks. And sometimes still fail.
So the point being… what could have been a better story??
The story could have been better if the main character was a phenomenal acting prodigy. And was recognized for it too. He believed in himself so much because of his talent. And that’s why he takes such a big risk of investing all his father’s property in it.
His mother could have been upset and stopped talking to him.
He could have made a successful debut like(HRithik, Shahid Kapoor or Ranveer Singh IRL) .
Gotten a lot more offers and money in 2 years he is flooded with offers and money and to win his mom’s love back. He somehow over pays and buys the property again. Giving a new life to Ruston Cafe.
That way his dream could have come true and father’s legacy is still upheld with pride.
In the world of delegation he doesn’t have to sit on the “ Galla” himself. Anyone can do the managerial job and mom is always there to over see it until she is alive.
This would have been a win win for everyone. A son should not have the pressure to uphold his father’s business unless he wants to.
He is an independent life and potential and should blossom the way he wants to.
This could have been story line would have been stellar to watch.
Also Persis character could have been his childhood best friend and remained friends. The sex angle was too unbelievable and forced. Cute and decent girls like Persis IRL don’t beg for their virginity to be taken. Seriously,, who wrote this sh*%t. Excuse me. But that part was senseless. I can vouch a man wrote it. Anyways you can watch it on a rainy day but it’s not that great because characters are not well rounded especially the main guy and his friend Perisis.