Aleks Saric

This story was incredibly detailed but unfortunately grueling to get through. It really captured what a 20 year old would sound like if every thought they had was recoreded. The depth of analysis between what she's feeling, what she thinks he's feeling, and what he's actually feeling went far beyond what i could handle and it made the shortest moments feel like an eternity. There are also many sections that the story could do without that would improve the readers experience. Overall I like the idea of capturing the awkwardness of a moment people don't usually talk about more than the story itself.