Actually, I'd like to know how I could give Penner negative stars. If she paid an editor, that person should seriously consider other options to make a living. Cannot even begin to describe my reasons for 1 star, as there couldn't be enough room. I hope my comment here gives just one potential reader serious thought after reading the sample. Also read the other reviewers' takes. Avoid hurting yourself with this indescribably horrific attempt at writing, please.