Great idea with the general theme
Of the plot but script details were poorly thought out leading to a very disjointed and shallow result with no character growth, lots of overacting, and unexpectedly but overwhelming poor direction. But it starts with the details of the story which was badly done....It’s better to tell a story well with specific details than to try and cram in tons of bits of a story in a cursory or superficial manner. And the ending had 90% of the audience moaning and rolling their eyes. A middle school play has better drama.