Vivien Madlen

The worst book I've ever read. -characters are flat and Lack personality -this reads Like a First draft -the intimate scenes partly Sound as if they were written by AI -The characters have zero emotional Connection -telling,telling and never showing (Bad writing) -worldbuilding lacks -instead of clever foreshadowing the Author Just tells you exactly whats going to happen and yes that then happens (what a surprise) -its meantioned that the Protagonist is "fat" "full" "round" "curvy" on every Other page and it feels very forced -the intimate scenes don't fit to the language of the Rest of the book at all making it feel as of some adult scenes accidentally landed in a YA novel -The Stakes are never high enough for me to care and since the characters lack character development or any Background really I never cared about them (Its not very smart to have characters sleep together before we even know WHO these characters are) -its says its about "Pirates" but how come Pirates never do anything that Pirates do.... These Guys are Just sailors