Charmaine mcc

This is quite an achievement and beautifully written, but the story often felt drawn out due to the abundance of metaphors describing the protagonist's deep internal emotions. While the metaphors were powerful, their overuse sometimes detracted from the narrative’s pace and made the story feel less captivating than it could have been. The emotional depth is undeniable, yet a more concise approach might have allowed the central message to resonate more effectively.