The inner dialogue is redundant and boring. Everything is spelled out bit by bit again and again like the reader is too stupid to keep up with two storylines. All the examples used in the book are hackneyed (like the milgram experiment or grocery store marketing). There aren't any well written characters - the characters are all one shade and I don't care for them nor have any interest in their lives.
These thriller novels all sound the same. Hot, rich, dead parents, young, blonde people that work in publishing and love books then murder for lame reasons. Why do these get picked for book club? Please send help!