Too long winded and frankly boring.
Too superfluous, tedious.
I actually liked the 1st version..light hearted. Although it was nice to encapsulate certain details like Cybkrg's origins..unnecessary. For most it's akin to regurgitating Bruce Wayne watching his parents getting shot. I suppose it's really a matter of preference. And depending on where WB/DC goes..all this may be irrelevant in the future.