harley bradshaw

This is prob one of the worst books i’ve ever read. Horrible grammar, run on sentences, there are points where I’m like this made no sense. Some of the words the author chose, like she wrote “quieten” at one point and pretty sure she meant to writer quieter. The writing style seemed immature and repetitive, lacked the SJM maturity. The whole book seemed like fanfiction that did not get revised (at all). I get people want steamy romance, but this was awful. I don’t even wanna touch on the offense student-teacher relationship being portrayed. I get it she was 22 but still, romanticizing this is bleh. You can have a male character being a dominating alpha male without being too much, maybe take notes from SJM or Jennifer. Overall, target audience is younger wattpad crowd.