Decent book of not well versed in finer points of WW2. However, the editing is the worst I've seen from a modern publication. The publisher deserves to be sent to Burma in 1942 under command of that zealot. Run on sentences, poor sentence structure, basic punctuation mis-used..
I'm fairly sure that even the author should have realized they were writing in an unintelligible style, perhaps better suited to comedic timing or something?