Lisa Lisa

The story line was good, the best part is the narrator January LaVoy. She is a great narrater. The part that I dislike is the language, I’m not a prude but do you have to take Jesus's name in vain? How many times do you need to use the F word. I thought you were a better writer but it seems that you have just gone with whatever pops in your mind. I would love to see you clean it up, then it would be a great story. I’m really disappointed, I have read and listened to most of your books. You can get better ratings if you went back to the way you use to write. This is the last Nora Robert's or JD Robb books I will listen too. I’m sure you will just send this to your trash pile, but someone needs to tell you the truth.