Good effort. I liked the idea the Author had but the execution was not exceptional. As this is the Authors first book I understand why her writing is a little crusty. Writing style is from my personal opinion not that great. I would totally suggest this book to someone who reads wattpad, and a beginner romance reader.
I wish all the best to the Author, hopefully her books in the future have that sparkle that I as a reader adore.
Once again I mean no harm, this is just some constructive criticism. My personal opinion, others opinion may obviously vary.