This was a light easy read. I enjoyed writer's description of events and her word choices which were a precise reflection of the world she beautifully painted.
It's true that there were too many stories whereas one strong storyline might have been more emphatic. If she had to use multiple plots it would have been nice to see them all intersect in some way. That way it could be more gripping.
Nonetheless, great work for a debut. Shweta Bachchan has good potential. Waiting for a sequel :)