I liked the story overall but the book or details of the story per chapter and character build up could've been written better. Each chapter felt like it has to be cut short and will not give further information. There was no element that could give importance to every moment of interaction of characters.
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Such as when Sunja and Hansu had their first dinner together with Mozasu, Solomon and Haruki, the conversation mostly focused on Haruki and his job. I find this lame and somehow this moment could have been what readers would like to know more about Sunja and Hansu interaction after how many years of not talking to each other. Some characters were cut-off immediately and open-endedly, such as when Isak died and Yoseb's death. Isak's death was only mentioned briefly on another chapter with 'After Isak died, ...' This made Isak's character as a minor one and had nothing to do with Noa growing up as his father. Their father and son interaction could've been an additional storyline or information for the readers on why Noa killed himself. It is still a puzzle why Noa killed himself. There was a little percentage of the story between Sunja and Isak as they lived in Osaka. Did they really loved each other? What has become of them as they were together? Why did Isak have let it happen that the three of them (the sexton and the minister) be imprisoned? Also found some loopholes on the conversation between Yumi and Sunja--Sunja mentioned about her mother's miscarriages, however, she could've mentioned her own miscarriages before Mozasu was born. Disappointingly, I could even find more details on the sexcapades of Noa and Akiko, and Solomon and Hana, which made the last chapters of the book a lowkey porn. The high details could've been made on the early chapters of the book to represent 'Pachinko'. Lastly, why was there no offspring that inherited Hoonie's discrepancies? This made the story unrealistic, and for me, this made an impression that the author is also discriminating the likes of Hoonie, being unwanted.