I'm a Scouser
Potential to be brilliant ... but I can't imagine people outside of Liverpool understanding main character's dialogue because I struggled.
Some of it was funny, but some of it was cringe worthy stereo typing.
I'm no prude, but school girl simulating sex & an orgasm for what felt like forever didn't t sit well with me, and the constant reference to 'burying my head in your ma's arse' was annoying as hell & absolutely gross. No need.
Do better. Its good without the shock factor.