No. No, no, no, no. I kept hoping the characters, the cases, the dialogue, something in this book would get better because it certainly had potential with the premise. This is also the 2nd James Patterson book (the 1st was Run Rose Run) I've read that I think he's writing with the hopes it'll become a TV show - or a favorite of teen readers and their discretionary dollars.
I would not recommend this for reading to anyone and if someone asked me I'd say hard pass