Keith Kennedy

Omg soo good...........ghfgdfgdhfgf

Oof. Inconsistent, confusing, contradictory and just plain badly planned writing. Written by someone who has potential but needs to spend about 5 more years working on a book to iron it out before publishing it. But idgaf you do you queen here's 5 stars your book was bad gl next time xx Also, I don't think the author actually read crime and punishment.... it made a super weird and confusing reference to it.

Not over-rated. Brilliant. Brilliant. Brilliant.

I can not read this anymore. It is so bad. It is so so so bad. The world building is sloppy, the writing style is inconsistent, it contradicts itself MULTIPLE times, sometimes in the very same sentence. The main character is supposed to by hyper intelligent, but he talks like he's giving a grade 8 speech. It is so bad. I literally can not do it anymore. I can not fathom how this book became so popular. It sucks so much ass oh my God. I'm sorry to the author... I just had to let it out because I spent so much time in hopes it'll get better. But I'll give it 5 stars cause whatever idc I just wanted to vent.

*chefs kiss* xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Amazing. Realistically I'd give it a 4.5, but for now 5 stars will do.

Every sentence is too poetic and introspective. It feels alienating and not creating a real presence. Like the "barbed wire eyes" and all that other cr*p. This is not how real people see the world, this they can't relate to the characters emotions no matter how many metaphors are used. Not a fan of this book. Ursula k leguin can create an atmosphere and let the reader feel complex emotions without a billion useless metaphors.