Roma Packer

This book is sooo good. I totally recommend, I just finished it and I love it so much. It will always have a a place in my heart:) However, the book didn't explain lots of things and it had a lot of plot holes. e.x How did Apollo even have the ability to take Eva's memories? How did Eva not die when she kissed Jacks? Jacks still has 1 kiss left over from their whole deal thingy. He didn't even use it? What happened to Marisol and Luc? Bruh they literally just dissapeared. I feel like their should have been more action because sometimes it got really boring, like when Eva didn't have any memories and she just kept doing random things in the castle. Also like how did she get her memories back? Was Apollos spell not strong enough or something? And yeah I know that why Jacks ate the apples to control his urges, but like that wasn't explained in the book. It should have been more obvious. Also the ending was rushed, and I feel like the book should have been longer. never rush your writing, always take your time. Other than that, the book series is really good! Its so fun and enchanting to read, its like ur getting sucked into a fairytale. I'm not getting over this. Besides all the plot holes, it's probably the best book iv'e read this year. love it. great work Stephanie Garber!! <3