Raven Edens

I ran to kindle for this book, as I was seeing it everywhere on tiktok booktok being recommended as this naughty book that's just a MUST READ! I got through the first chapter fine, little to be said about it. But when the stalker is introduced....several issues...First the action scene are written as the reddits r/edgelord, niceguys, and neckbeards combined. Second the way he is described is again laughable. Then onto the spicy bits. Again laughable....this whole book reads as if a prepubescent boy were to write it. I wouldn't waste my time on this book at all, and the fact that there is two of them is mind boggling.