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Ridiculous amount of typos and grammatical errors! Was the book not edited before being published? I think the plot definitely has substance but the writing style is incredibly literal and basic - which is a shame 🙁 I would suggest that the writer also needs to maintain better the rule of ‘show, don’t tell’ Much of the description was massively over explained and repetitively written! The story’s climax was definitely the best part, probably the only part where I actually felt remotely connected to the story.