Hellybaby G

Poorly written, no structure, borrowings from better writers such as Maya Angelou, full of cliche some of which doesn’t make sense and, in some parts, a nonsensical changes in narrative voice. As a poem (and I use the term loosely) it is bland at its best. I think Miss Gorman is a passionate person and perhaps she will be better suited to her political aspirations, I could see her giving a speech in the name of social justice and I think people would listen and take note but she isn’t a poet and I think it’s wrong to suggest she is.