Stacey A

Started off ok. After a while the love talk got a bit too much… started skimming to find some story line.. which is pretty thin.. Some scenes explained end up disjointed.. hands are where? Clothes wearing disappear at one point (i think a jumper around the waist was suddenly then not there- leaves a little confusion) maybe after editing?? Anyway glad i read it and the characters are believable so they are now in my head. But definitely had my fill of adjectives about mouths and chests for a while.