Ashley Smart

- awful fight scenes.. they need to hire actual stunt experts next time...and actors that can do the physical work.. hair cuts don't cut it.. object permanence is something most children develop.. forgetting that there are other characters just standing around while someone else is murdered is a serious issue.. - characters are 1d straw man cuts outs.. they don't feel realistic.. you can remove any off them and no one would care.. you definitely notice they only exist to prop up the weak central charater(s) - script and plot is just ugh.. characters repeatly say stupid things or forget what was just said to them.. or run away only to run back again.. seriously why???.. how is this even a story??? - the plot is completely transparent.. the writers are clearly subpar.. foreshadowing, like salt, is a flavor to add you don't pour the entire bottle into the dish it just spoils it.. - the writers personal beliefs trump world building.. this stupidity has destroyed so many potentially good stories. A writer needs to suspend their own beliefs and place the characters in the world with the rules of the world working on them.. and then write what happens.. this creates immersion and believability.. if your own world would eat your characters alive and they somehow don't die then ppl will stop believing it and stop watching.. don't write trope rubbish with plot armor characters.. ppl realise it's just garbage not worth the time.. I will not be watching season 2... And honestly it might be time I suspend my disney+