The way novel was in the start was good and then further all the incidents were well specified and explained. The part that needs to be worked on is a better ending. I think somewhere the behavior of Alex was weird to disclose his long-term plan and then again run for Ava. Despite knowing Ava couldn't trust Alex again she still choose to comeback again with Alex. That toxic part was romanticized. A relationship without a trust is NOTHING!!!!. It was very long could have been short and sweeet. But overall its pretty amazing to read and the each incident is detailed is amazing.