Adryan Rathburn

The story itself is great. I really like the characters and the journey they go on. However, the way it is written makes visualizing the book near impossible. My utter annoyance with the consistent run on sentences and improper punctuation, whether purposeful or not, makes reading this book near impossible. There are also times where i cannot differentiate which characters are speaking/interacting because there is minimal clarification until after the interaction. I would not reccomend the book unless you are willing to drag yourself through a sea of "and's" and confusion.