Bubbles

I have been enjoying this series but I agree that the typos and grammar leave a lot to be desired. Someone is laying 'impossibly still' but is also trembling. Silky dresses that are only ever described as falling/moving 'like liquid'. And general redundant sentences. It reads like it was written by a teenager with a beautiful imagination. There are amazing narrative beats that I am still happy to give it 4 stars. Just needs a good editor to give it a once over, that's all. :)