Dorotha Davis

I love your stories , BUT I hate your placement of words, dog sniffing outside the bushes one more time, really ?? Dog sniffed all the bushes one more time before hopping in car so they could resume their journey, Do you use a talking machine that messes with your words ?? if so get rid of it or proofread what you have "written" I know I am NO writer of stories but really you either sound like someone that can't speak English very well or you are uneducated , as I said I love your stories about Laramie WYo. and the "peoples" lives , I buy your books and will continue to do so but PLEASE fix the way you place your words !!