Sneha Shah

The basic story line was decent but writer could have done more research. Many parts simply were unbelivable. The part where school of Rabanni is based in BKC and Daksh stays in Kandivali shows writer has never been to Mumbai. Any person staying in Mumbai would vouch that it's utterly inconvenient to travel so much just for school everyday when decent schools are available in Kandivali itself. Plus daksh having a disabled and Ill father and all those responsibilities of sole provider and care taker of house. Why choose to travel so much everyday. Character development of Anchal was a major issue. She is shown as smart, determined, intelligent women who knows what she wants, the reason given for her being in an abusive relation and taking all that trauma for so long was not strong enough. She needed her friend who was a supporting character to save the day for her. I would have liked it much more if she would have pulled her self out of the mess she was in. That would have truly proven her to be a strong determined women that she was portrayed in the begining of the story. Abusive language was simply unnecessary. Toxic relation can be shown in so many more creative ways. How could a strong character like Anchal be ok with being called all those insulting names and being sweared for years and do nothing about it. Also when Vicky's mom knew that Anchal has cheated by being with Rajat, why was she ok with Anchal to begin with. Any parent would ask their son to be miles away from a girl who can't be trusted. Why are they asking Anchal to fix Vicky? I kept on wishing it wud improve but it just kept on continuing , left the book halfway. Its too many things which just didn't fit well together.